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Poem Analysis: Girl By Jamaica Kincaid

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After the long process of thinking of ideas on which to write this last essay on, I decided I would re-write the poem Girl by Jamaica Kincaid. I decided to re-write the poem from the words of a father towards his son as opposed to the words of a mother to her daughter depicted in the original piece. In my piece, I mimicked Kincaid in sentence structure and flow while swapping genders and keeping the overall meaning and significance to family.
While writing the gender opposite spinoff to Girl, I chose to mimic Kincaid in both her sentence structure and overall flow of the poem and deviate away from her overall poem structure. Kincaid fill her poem with chaos and randomness comprising a list of things a mother would have told her daughter. In my re-creation, the randomness and chaos is still evident. I chose to keep this style because I think that is what sets off this poem to be unlike other poems. For example, Kincaid says, “this is how to make a good medicine to throw away a child before it even becomes a child” into “this is how to catch a fish” (Kincaid). These jumps in topic keep the reader engaged by …show more content…

Seeing that the original is from a woman’s point of view, I thought that it would be fitting to make a male version of the poem. Throughout the original poem were lines from a mother to her daughter on the expectancies and rules she should abide by in order to become a great version of a woman. By substituting the daughter with a son and a mother with a father, I created a piece of writing about the expectancies and rules a man should abide by from a father’s point of view. Through doing this I could portray the differences between the roles and stereotypes of men and women. I believe this is beneficial in the fact that there is a greater understanding and awareness to what these differences are, hopefully allowing a greater connection between

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