I requested the writing specialist to focus on three areas: Grammar and Mechanics, Thesis and Sentences Structure. The feedback I received was great. My introduction provides a clear context to my discussion, background information, and thesis statement of looking at solutions to a problem and discussing ethical implications! The writing specialist did point out reviewing APA guidelines on presenting headings and subheadings and recommended using either PIE or ICE methods to effectively incorporate research into my own points, information from sources that proves them, and explanations of significance and relevance to your purpose for writing.
A few areas that the writing specialist pointed out in which I need to review and refresh. 1. Fully
Think about your experiences of writing at college. Which types of assignments have you found helpful in strengthening your writing skills? Where do you want to improve your writing? What’s the most useful advice you’re received that’s helped you improve your writing. Be as specific as possible.
While attending writing class, I learned about the 4 steps in writing, bases for revising, organizing, and connecting specific information, and I also learned about the different types of essays such as descriptive, narrative, process, cause and effect and argumentative essay. I have been a student at Milwaukee Area Technical College for 1 semester, and over the course of my enrollment I have grown and learned more that I knew prior to attending this writing course. Participating in this writing class has taught me so much more than stuff about literature and language, it has taught me another way of expressing myself. I have learned here how to write and express myself, how to think for myself, and how to find the answers to the things that I don 't know. Most importantly I have learned how important technique, outlines and organization are. My goal in this paper is to inform writers about how my writing skills have improved.
Within the past eight weeks, I have realized my strengths and weaknesses within the writing process. I have realized that I do not utilize the first step within the writing process of prewriting. However, for the drafting, revising, and polishing steps of the writing process, I am very familiar and use additional resources to strengthen the writing assignment. I create multiple drafts, which includes revising and polishing in each step. Therefore, I use all three of these steps in multiple drafts as I reach the final product for
3. Warn : The number of days before password is to expire that user is warned that his/her password must be changed.
ID Name of asset Owner Description of Asset Asset Type Data Type Retention Risks / impact Key asset 01 Personal Computers Staffs Each particular employee used their own PC for their works. Hardware Personal 1.5 year Availability Yes 02 Laptops Head of IT The device could be handled by many peoples Hardware Personal 1.5year Availability
! for troubleshooting access-list 111 permit icmp any 192.168.1.0 0.0.0.255 echo access-list 111 permit icmp any 192.168.1.0 0.0.0.255 echo-reply
Hi, my sister's phone has somehow been reset. When you press the home button, the screen reads "Activation Lock" and says that the iphone was lost or erased. Her Apple ID is Whitneyvanland@gmail.com, she doesn't remember her first password from when we first set it up. I have reset her password but, on the activation lock it says that I need the password from when we first set up her
In 2000 the housing unit density for all of Mercer County was just over 74 houses per square mile. The city of Sharon has the highest housing density in the entire county with almost 1,997 unites per square mile. Considering this ratio there are more apartments and people renting rather than owning their own homes to save space. The Northern Tier Area has the lowest density with just 22 houses per square mile so there are no apartments just houses (Housing pg. 41-42).
It is the stage of expressing attention to issues and giving opinions and it is possible to perform certain actions in relation to issues that are considered important. This stage determines the management of good issues and must be proactive to monitor (scanning) the environment.
IS3350 Unit 2 Assignment 1: Executive Summary on Veteran’s Affairs (VA) and Loss of Private Information
Measuring health status and treatment effects has become increasingly important for occupational therapists working with clients. To justify treatment methods utilized in therapy, it is crucial to collect outcome measures supported by evidence-based research (Berghmans, Lenssen, Can Rhijn, & De Bie, 2015). In working with Mr. Jones, who recently suffered a total hip replacement, I can assess his progress and health status by utilizing evidence-based assessment scales. As we progress through therapy together I want to assure Mr. Jones is regaining his independence and reaching his goals. Through the Patient-Specific Functional Scale (PSFS) and the Medical Outcome Study Short Form
UGH! This assignment was difficult! There were so many students that I wanted to include and it was very challenging to only pick three! I chose Michael because he was so obviously “gifted” in that he had displayed extremely high test scores and showed the ability to have original thought. I then wanted to be as inclusive as possible, and choose someone from a low SES household and with a minority background, while still having data to support my decisions. My second choice was Pearl. Pearl had high scores and seemed to have the behaviors to succeed in the system. I think that the program would benefit her, and that as soon as her parents saw that, they would come around. My third choice was Elaine. Elaine shows high creative ability and characteristics
Sadly, I am unable to access the account that your order was placed on, please provide me with one of the following:
The Memo will directly address my growth as a writer throughout my time in EH 101-13. It will also highlight my current strengths and weaknesses in my own personal writing style.
AN: Please, feel free to give me constructive criticism. I want to make my writing better for all of us.