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Essay On Literacy Reflection

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Throughout my time writing at the City College of New York, I experienced a slow and dramatic transition to my first semester of this college course. During that time, I've learned from several feedback and lessons from certain peers and my professor. Because of the strict comments written in my drafts by my professor, a few helpful suggestions to include in my writing, and a few miserably failures, I was able to see how my writing and habits have changed during the duration of this course. Back in high school, I was always comfortable writing only five paragraph essays (Introduction, three body paragraphs, and a conclusion), but I've never expected to write something more complex. Here, I was encouraged to include as much detail as I can instead of writing something vague

As you can see, for my first draft of my literacy narrative, I briefly explained how English as a Second Language (ESL) helped me improve my reading comprehension and writing because I was born in a foreign country that speaks Spanish, but I was brought to the United States, were it's mostly spoken in English, and my home language remain Spanish. With that feedback from my professor and peers commenting similar suggestions like the one above, I included specific situations that served as examples of progress. I also expanded on a method of learning through music lyrics by using Micheal Jackson's songs and specified the words used, I managed to compose a decent literacy narrative for

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